Feedback on Misfits Analysis
"The detail is v. good and you have included most things, however, not much music mentioned."
"Very good introduction with video but not enough reference to theories and maybe more detail on equilibrium?"
"Good notes on individual characters."
"Good Gifs, fab descriptions, loads of info without being boring. Seperated well, good ratio of text to pics/giffage. Good layout and good inclusion of stereotypes. Breif narratove structure? Maybe more info needed? Fields' 3 Act Structure not mentioned?"
"The Gifs make it instantly eye catching and keep attention throughout. Terminology, descriptions and explanations are detailed and relevent, giving all necessary info! Could change text colour."
"Good analysis of characters and clear understanding of representations and stereotypes. Gifs keep us interested and make the heavy text less intimidating. Good use of colour and detailed evaluation."
"Good explanations of stereotypes. Keeps you interested with the video and images. Could explain theories more."
Overall, our main strengths were the analysis itself, and the use of terminology and relevent information within it, and the layout ie. use of text, images, Gifs, video.
Our main weakness is not linking our findings to the original theories of which they are based, and there is also no description of these anywhere. There also wasn't enough on the use of music.
To improve, I plan to upload a photocopy of the descriptions of the different theories as a reminder to refer to when analysing other clips. I will also try to keep an equal amount of detail/information on all of the four main areas, instead of focussing mise en scene and camera shots mostly by incorporating more analytical ideas about editing and sound.
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